I think it's wonderful, but don't go by that! I'm no good at constructive criticism and I loved the pictures of the birds and the dialogue. Definitely finish it, I'll be back there! Madeline.
-------------------- "Power tends to corrupt, and absolute power corrupts absolutely." Lord Acton, 1887.
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