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thekingy2k
new user
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 8
Loc: Manchester
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If you are up for a laugh then point your browser to:http://hometown.aol.co.uk/thekingy2k
I will GUARANTEE that you will like what you see
S.Elliott
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TheFatControlleR
Forum Admin
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 6554
Loc: Megatripolis
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Hi Stuart,
I can't comment on the content (yet), as it takes an aweful long time to load (well, it currently equate to 16 pages of A4 copy on one page!!) - you could try dividing it into sections for ease of use. And, as far as design is concerned, it leaves a lot to be desired (let's face it, there is none). 
Well, this is the area for inviting site critique. 
TFC
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AndrewC
Staff
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 896
Loc: London, UK
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Hi Stuart
Is this your site? If so, can you tell us a bit more about it?
Also, a warning to others, it's not suitable for kids
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squiffy2
regular
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 44
Loc: UK
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HI Kingy
As a joke meister, might I suggest a few changes?
You would do better to split up your joke categories, especially as quite a few of the jokes are (rated) interspersed with more of a (clean) nature. I know you have the pop up warning, but, to ensure better throughput I suggest this may be a better way to go.
It would also make the sit emore managable to have things on seperate pages to keep things compact and decrease the need for too much scrolling.
Hope that helps.
squiffs
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Jonny555
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 5303
Loc: Cheshire, England
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The site needs designing. It's very laborious all the scrolling. You definitely need to break it up into different pages for different categories. I personally don't like the background colour. Some of the jokes were funny, but lots I found just crude and not funny at all.
Well done for making a site is all I can say. Theres just nothing appealing about it for me, thats not to say others won't like it. Give the design a bit of thought and who knows I may go back.
I like a good joke and spend a fair bit of time looking for jokes on the net, but the site needs to be appealing as well. Go and have a look at some of the established joke sites and take note how they've been built.
http://www.jonny555.co.uk
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michaelleeds2711
regular
Reg'd: Sun
Posts: 65
Loc: Brighton
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I echo squiffy2, Jonny555 s comments, the web page is bland its the sickly green background, as Squiffy and jonny said the jokes need to be catagorized ie squeaky clean, Clean, little bit riske, Rude, not in front of the vicar, and adult only also dividers between each joke would be good. If possible how about different pages for different jokes ?
I am not criticising your site for the sake of it, just constructive criticism.
And I know a few people on this forum will be happy offer help and advice if you need it to redesign your web site.
Take Care
Michael
Edited by TheFatControlleR on 08/09/2003 17:01 (server time).
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thekingy2k
new user
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 8
Loc: Manchester
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Thanks for the tips everyone :) I am currently updating the site doing the things I have overlooked in the past.
Once again thanks
S.Elliott
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squiffy2
regular
Reg'd: Fri
Posts: 44
Loc: UK
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Hi Kingy, if you want som emore material, feel free to filch some from the House of Fun!
cheers
squiffs
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