Um, not meaning to sound negative, but it certainly looks very plain and uninspiring. If you are planning on using the site as a shop window for your web skills, maybe you need to rethink the layout.

Also, the first two sites:

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/welshy2000/
http://www.thehoodiadiet.co.uk/

look completely lost on a bigger screen res. (e.g. 1280 * 1024). Esp. the diet one, where the main content seems to float off to the right while the menu is stuck on its own on the left.

The hoodiet site looks a bit more attractive that the benznet site, which doesn't do your skills justice, judging by the other sites you have done.

http://www.jimpix.co.uk/